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Sunfall's Secret- chapter two

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As Syreilia lifted her lightsaber, ready to end Juanas life, she was so filled up with rage and hate, that she didn´t mentioned the big, dark shadow behind her.
The last thing she felt was the strong pain of a lightsaber, that cut in her back.
The last thing she saw was Juanas face, astonished... and regretting.
The last thing she heard was her own, painfull scream, when Darth Vader murdered her.

Juana Sunfall stared at the dead body of her former friend. "Syre...", she whispered.
Darth Vader stood over the corp, and deactivated his weapon. His mask turned to Sunfall.
"This Jedi seemed to already know you. Don´t you want to explain that to me?", he asked with a menacing undercurrent.
She walked through the stone-kettle, and stopped a half metre before him. "Of course I´ll do. but first, let me have a look at your injurie."
The dark lord looked down his chest, and touched the damage with his right hand. He winced.
As he took his hand off, it was very bloody, and blood poured also down his suit, to his boots and the ground. If he lost further more blood, he could die , Juana was sure. Her doctor-skills were strong enough to recognize a life-support system and a half-prothetic body.
Vader made a step backwards. "You don't have ... any medical...equipment.."
She followed him slowly. "I won't need it." She moved close to him, and pressed her hand against his chest. He growled painfully.
"Shhh...just keep still for a moment." Juana closed her eyes, and used the force. Suddenly, the air around them was glowing in a white light...
The controll-panel on Vaders chest beeped an alarm, the dark lord breathed quickly.
Then the breathing-sound stopped. It was all quiet.

The young woman opened her eyes again, and Vader backed off from her, gasping for air. He needed a moment to recover, and it took also a little while till his breathing-mashine worked normally.
His hand moved to the hurt part of his body again. There was no more blood and he didn´t feel any pain. Vader knew exactly what was going on.
" I´ve already felt the force in you when you reported for duty on my ship."
Juana smiled."I know. You´ve got remarkable skills. "
There wasn´t any kind of crawling in her voice, only deep respect for him. So he granted her with a nod to speak on.
" The girl's name was Syreilia Chikou. We both were Jedi- apprentices...and friends. I was going to be a healer. But after a few times I mentioned that the Jedi were more and more arrogant greedy for the force. They lost their way, their ideals, and I didn't want to belong to an order like that."

Juana stopped for a moment. Vader had come closer to her. He stood right behind her. She felt his breath on her neck. Would he kill her now? Show him, you're not afraid. Show him, that your past got nothing to do with your loyality for the empire.
"So I left them."
"Your `friend´ didn´t want to go with you", Vader determined.
"No. She felt confident about the order. I´ve never seen her until today." Now she dared to turn her head a little bit, so she could see the dark lord behind her. He didn´t make any move.
"Before I joined the empire´s academy, I studied medicine... And I worked on my force-skills on my own."
She looked down. Waiting, what for a kind of punishment the dark lord would use for her. But there wasn´t any anger or cold in his voice. He just asked: " Do you know your friend´s master?"
She did her best, to conceal her astonishment. " Philius Crusser...", she answered, " you would declare him as `avarage´."
"Good. Come on, commander." Juana felt a cold windblow, as Darth Vader turned on his heel, and went out of the stone-kettle. Without another word.
She could hear her own heartbeat, as her thoughts told her what was happened at this moment.
She had told Darth Vader, second leader of the empire and dark lord of the sith, that she had been a jedi once... and he let her alive! Either he had decided to kill only a special number of people a month, and she only had very big luck... or she was going to experience the greatest adventure of her live.
As Vader stopped a few meters away from her, and looked back to her, she knew that it wasn´t a good time for beeing lost in dreams.
"Commander...?"
"I´m sorry, mylord. I´m comming."

Another place on the planet Silar. A little green lizzard-like alien made his way through metal and stones, to reach a cave, hidden under lots of deep-hanging leaves.
"Philius!"
A young man stepped out of the shadow, waiting for news from the alien... and his padawan.
Neecou looked at him sadly. "I´m sorry. Syreilia is...dead."
Philius lowered his head. " Oh no... I should have taken more care of her...Who is the new sith? He must be strong. Syreilia was a very good warrior."
Neecou made a fist with his little right hand. "He is. The young woman, who escorts him, called him "lord Vader." I guess he's a cyborg."
Philius' eyes seemed to fix a point far away from them, when he murmured:" interesting..."
The aliens voice let him return to reality. " And that woman... She had a lightsaber."
A moment later, the jedi signified his friend to go. " Come on, Neecou. It's time to meet this Vader in person."
Finally commander Sunfall revealed her secret powers... And got in big trouble. Will her live be ended by the  ominous jedi-padawan... Or possibly even by Darth Vader himself...?
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piccololover01's avatar
this is a good story, keep it up...